hmm, I notice that Midge’s shirt is getting a bit transparent as it is soaked by the rain! Good job on that detail! wonder what it looks like from the front? wonder if Eddie will notice?
I’ve been reading this for a couple of days and instantly hooked. Even finished all the previous cases yesterday.
I hate to say that I discovered this (and the site) too late (8 years too late, I guess?), but I love to say that this (and the entirety of the series) is very… interesting; and I like how you portray the goons – some are unique, some are just there for the shit and giggles. I think I have fuzzy memories about me reading this back when I was in junior high.
hmm, I notice that Midge’s shirt is getting a bit transparent as it is soaked by the rain! Good job on that detail! wonder what it looks like from the front? wonder if Eddie will notice?
Yes, it’s funny how things like that can happen.
I’ve been reading this for a couple of days and instantly hooked. Even finished all the previous cases yesterday.
I hate to say that I discovered this (and the site) too late (8 years too late, I guess?), but I love to say that this (and the entirety of the series) is very… interesting; and I like how you portray the goons – some are unique, some are just there for the shit and giggles. I think I have fuzzy memories about me reading this back when I was in junior high.
Greetings from Indonesia.
Hey, thank you! I’m really glad you like it, and I appreciate the kind words.
I’m sure Lana could have made the swim- she’s naturally buoyant!
Yeah, she should have thought of that!
Kinda want to see this road runner get hers. But of course she will get away.
She’s a slippery one!
I don’t know, Sean. The art has been up to your usual high standards but so far I really wish Lana would talk a bit less in this one.
I was wondering when anyone would notice how chatty she’s been.
Lana says: “Smarter than your goons but that’s nowhere near enough”
Yes, she knows all the tricks!